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Aug 8Liked by Richard Ritenbaugh

Oh no! Mardans is in a trouble, and doesn't have his whip!

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He will have to use his wits! It’s the very thing he felt himself least capable of doing.

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Aug 6Liked by Richard Ritenbaugh

Love the detail and dialog here. Just fantastic!

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Thank you! Your words are very encouraging!

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Aug 6Liked by Richard Ritenbaugh

You're welcome! I'm looking forward to reading more!

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This story is almost done, but I already have another heating up on a back burner!

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Aug 6Liked by Richard Ritenbaugh

Perfect! Just keep 'em coming!

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