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Roger's avatar

A fitting end. Some mistakes you just can't come back from.

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Indeed. I wanted it to end in a realistic way. Thanks for reading!

Diane McIver's avatar

Most excellent! And quite exciting. I love how calmly Lorens met his opponent.

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

He's a true master of the sword (and kinda knows it)!

Diane McIver's avatar

I would say most experts know they're experts and are really proud of it!

Beth Ritenbaugh's avatar

Not the outcome Marinacci had hoped for.

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Not at all! He severely underestimated Prince Lorens, both as a person of integrity and as a swordsman. He got what he deserved.